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You've been acting funny lately
Is everything alright?
Don't you tell me that it's nothing
I see you toss n turn all night

You know I would give you anything
I'd bleed to make you smile
But if you're busy pointing fingers
I'll refuse to stand on trial

I'll walk away from everything
If you tell me that it makes it all better
I was here when life went to hell
And I stayed faithful through all weather

You're Killing me (Killing me)
You're Killing me

You ask me why I still fight
I don't know the answer
I'm trying to believe that We'll change

You tell me that I'm uptight
But you're not any better
No matter what I'm always to blame

So perfectly Ignited
I sit and watch our love burn
Tearing at the sight of the flames

Can't be the only one who fights it
When is it gonna be your turn
To be the one in love and insane...

I'm on the outside looking in
Because You barricaded all entry
I just wanna stand by your side
But it seems like I'm just an enemy

I'm fighting an army of hate
but I'm weak without player 2
I wish you would just hit restart
Because I don't want to lose (you)

I'll walk away from everything
If you tell me that it makes it all better
I was here when life went to hell
And I stayed faithful through all weather

You're Killing me (Killing me)
You're Killing me

You ask me why I still fight
I don't know the answer
I'm trying to believe that We'll change

You tell me that I'm uptight
But you're not any better
No matter what I'm always to blame

So perfectly Ignited
I sit and watch our love burn
Tearing at the sight of the flames

Can't be the only one who fights it
When is it gonna be your turn
To be the one in love and insane...

So break me down (There's no more hiding)
And Cut me out (There's no more fighting)
Let me free (I can't keep trying)
And I'll let you be(Sick of the lying)

(Im on the outside looking in)

You ask me why I still fight
I don't know the answer
I'm trying to believe that We'll change

You tell me that I'm uptight
But you're not any better
No matter what I'm always to blame

So perfectly Ignited
I sit and watch our love burn
Tearing at the sight of the flames

Can't be the only one who fights it
When is it gonna be your turn
To be the one in love and insane... (x2)

You've been acting funny lately
Is everything alright...
About one person fighting to keep the relationship alive, the other not seeming to care and is deciding whether they want to leave or not.
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justawhore Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
you led a secret,double life in porn. You seem to leave that out of your poems. Admit it you scumbag. Accept responsibility and tell me you are sorry for making me watch you lick a niggers asshole. You are a disgusting , perverted whore. I thought you were my woman. You are a piece of shit liar
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:iconghostjay55:
Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
1. I'm a Guy xD 2. I lead no double life.. especially seeing I just turned 18 not too long ago so I couldnt have done any type of porn 3. I wouldn't have my tongue anywhere near a guy, never mind an asshole.... 4. I accept responsibility for everything i do and finally.. 5. Yet again.. I don't know you. though I hope you find the "scumbag" who apparently fucked you over.
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takozilla Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesomeness this ones amazing
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Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you liked it.
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SpriteBlayde Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow... this was deep. But I think you did a great job of describing what it's like. I was in a... 'relationship' of sorts that was like this. I was the one on the outside. Great job! :)
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:iconghostjay55:
Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Chea Lolz it sucks :/ But at least you can smile about it now.
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SpriteBlayde Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Exactly. :D
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Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed :D
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Ambercatlucky2 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Professional General Artist
Wow, this is... by far my most favourite thing by you so far.
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:iconghostjay55:
Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww really, I was hoping the one I wrote for you would have been xD :P
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