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Tears of an angel
Slid slowly down her face

The origins of emotion
Back to me they have traced

I have made many young mistakes
But no failure can compare

To the beautiful heaven sent angel
I left alone and in despair

I'm an enemy to the world
For robbing them of her smile

If the planets only had eyes
They would line up, single file

If the sun could feel her touch
It would shine twice as bright

And the moon and stars would dance
At such a marvelous sight

But alas the sun shines low
And the moon and stars sit still

Because they drown in the tears of an angel
And heaven sits in wait for the kill
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BlizzardFoxx Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just.. stunning. It's gorgeous!
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Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
glad you liked it :P
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:iconuselessitalian:
UselessItalian Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.
Reminds me of a song.
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:iconghostjay55:
Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
well this is one of the only ones with no musical inspiration...
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooooh.
Then even better. ^^
Amazing work!


LINK: Cuz you should just... [link]
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Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe later... and thanks..
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay...


What's up? You okay?
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Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yeah..
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:iconuselessitalian:
UselessItalian Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okaaaaay...


If you need/want to talk, message me, mkay?
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Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'll talk to you... but I don't vent or rant much.. so Itll just be a normal convo..
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