literature

Send me away

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Literature Text

Send me away
To a place not tracked my miles
I know you don't want me to stay
So maybe now you can finally smile

Send me away
Like everyone else has before you
I'll find a new place to lay
For what else is a broken man to do

Send me away
Yet again I will play as the fool
Tear up my heart just to play
Then toss me like a useless tool

Send me away
What more can you want from me
Your leaving my heart to decay
So just let go and leave me be

Send me away
Away so I can go back to being alone
Go back to being cast astray
And go back to a world without a home.
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Chezzy-Am's avatar
#PoeticalCondition critique

this poem is a decent composition. The sense of indifference that is pouring from the poet's words makes this poem simple, honest, straightforward, and caring. I feel that the words chosen also make this work a really nice composition, and at the same time, this work doesn't have that many grammatical problems. Its a decent composition. Well done.