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If only You'd say yes.

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You want to know how i feel,
but im in fear of what you would say.
Telling you plainly "i love you",
Is not enough to make you stay

So the reasons that i love you...
is it your smile? Is it your laugh?
is it the fact that i can tell you anything,
and know that you'll always have my back?

Is it because you're like one of the guys?
Never afraid to make fun of us back.
But still showing that you are a lady
that is gentle and with feelings intact.

Just the feeling of seeing you next to me,
is enough to make my heart race.
It would stop at the sound of your voice,
but wont settle for less than first place.

You tell me that you aren't perfect,
and i tell you that nobody is.
But if i had the chance to change that,
There is nothing that i need to fix.

Now you know how you make me feel,
and i hope that i do not regret this...
but you and i could be perfect together,
if only you would say yes.
A Love Poem that i've written for someone.--- Enjoy.
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prettyflour's avatar
Oh! This is sad but beautiful love poem. I say sad because the thought of telling someone 'i love you' without it being enough is so...sad.

But, as I find in most of your poetry, the feeling self worth carries through out. You have a strong sense of what's right- both in love and in yourself. Like you know where you need to be, and who you belong with but not everyone is as strong as you are... I hope that makes sense!! ha ha.

My favorite stanza:
You tell me that you aren't perfect,
and i tell you that nobody is.
But if i had the chance to change that,
There is nothing that i need to fix.


Guh... Beautiful and simple words that say <i<so much.</i>