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I wish my eyes were a mirror
so you can see you as i see
your heart was crushed by an image
built by a cruel society

I wish my eyes were a mirror
So that i may help you to believe
that what they say is lies
and show you how you are to me

I wish my Heart could speak clearer
to help you understand
that you are the only person
that can fill my empty hands

I wish i could be your savior
Wipe away your fresh tears
i would gently say i love you
as i hold you through the years

And i wish my soul was a healer
to undo all of the pain
Make all their hostile efforts
finally end in vain

But to you im just a stranger
or "Just friends at best"
because you fear that i will hurt you
just like all the rest

So i wish my eyes were a mirror
So you can see you as i see
And ill continue to count the days
until you become one with me.
A love poem i wrote a while back, edited a little to make it better.
Hope you enjoy
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:iconcyanwings:
WOW! Your lovely words were so powerful and amazing to read! :iconyuiwahplz: I think you're an amazing poet and I can't wait to see more great things from you! :iconkyutsmileplz:
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Ghostjay55 Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :) I try, Glad you liked it.
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AyeAye12 Jan 9, 2014  Student Writer
To the point, and great subtle rhyming.
Good stuff.
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Ghostjay55 Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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:iconwishingdreamer5:
Oh wow, I didn't know it was possible to turn such strong emotions into beautiful words. This is by far one of the most stunning poems on this site :heart:
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Ghostjay55 Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, Thank you :) I appreciate that :D
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:iconwishingdreamer5:
You're welcome. :D Keep up the great work!
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Ghostjay55 Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I plan on it :)
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jojo22 Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely beautiful :heart:
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Ghostjay55 Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you liked this one, it's one of my favorites xD
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