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The Goodbye for now hurts me
And it is for your pleasure alone you see
For you are the only one who gains
And your heart he'll "Forever" Keep

But little did you know my dear
that you weren't the only one
Now your sitting there all alone
while they are together on the run

The Goodbye for later hurts us both
For as you try to come to me
I am forced to pull up the courage
To tell you its just not to be

Because if you were willing to leave me
for someone who you barely knew
then i know that you would do it again
And then i can no longer blame you.

So cry on my shoulder if you need to
I never said we couldn't be friends
but as far as love is ever concerned
This will have to be the end.
Late night thinking and BAM a new poem. Enjoy.
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Ambercatlucky2 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Professional General Artist
x_x why do all the writers i watch keep writing poems that are so faking bang on to feelings of my life?!
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Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
-shrug- I dont know. I just put my feelings in a way that is relate-able to the readers.
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Ambercatlucky2 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
welp, you do it well! X3
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Ghostjay55 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha awwe thanks :3
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Ambercatlucky2 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
mmmhm!
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